2003-09-07 5:40 p.m.
xheartheartx Content (25/40)- One of the first entries I read was your bio page. I really liked the style you had with it. It was unique, but you should write more about yourself. It didn't really give much information about you. Your cast page didn't really give much information either. Work on these two pages. Your to do list was quite interesting too. I didn't like your calender it seemed pointless to me. Your entries are generally short. You are influenced a great deal by movies and songs about love and you often quote these and then say why these relate to you. I'm sure you know that life isn't a song or a movie. You really should be talking about these incidences in your own words rather than taking it from others. It is your diary by the way. Your entries are mostly upset ones. Cheer up and write some happy ones.
Layout (9/10)- You don't give credit to any layout designers, so I'm assuming this one was made by you. It's nice. The white, pink and black go nicely with you font choice. It's a very simple layout. I like it. It messed up a bit on your rings page though. Grammar and Spelling (15/15)- Your grammar and spelling are good. Updating (3/5)- You have an awful lot of updates. You update 4 or 5 times a day in some cases, but you also miss days. Instead of updating so many times in one day, you should concentrate on making a decent entry for each day. Contacts (9/10)- Notes, email, aim. No guestbook? Getting Around (5/10)- Your navigation was placed up on the left hand side all by it's own. Nice and easy to see and get around with. Something was wrong with your older.html pages though. You really should check that out as I couldn't get to some of your older archived entries. It was a major error so I took off big points for that. Extra Things (5/5)- bio, to do list, music playlist, cast, calender, lists and diaryrings. Lots of extra stuff. Fun Factor (0/5)- I had no fun at your diary. Extra Credit (0/5)- Nope. Total (71/100)- Comments- Reviewed by- Abie previous | next |
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