2004-03-02 7:26 p.m.
tsilien Content (35/40)- You have a few rather shallow views on the world, but I won't get into that (unless I find something else that reeks of selfishness). Your diary, as a whole, is a good read. You write about mostly mundane things that are of no interest to me, but the way you write them sort of makes me want to know more. You also seem to be your typical teenager trying to seperate yourself from everyone else. After years of experience, I've learned one thing. You don't seperate yourself from everyone else, they seperate themselves from you. You're only twelve or thirteen and I'm sad to say this, but you're more interesting and educated than some 18 year olds. Congratulations! Right now your life is just petty arguments with friends, hobbies, and complaints, but as you get older we will see a new element. Boys, bigger arguments, and college. I can't wait, because I know you'll make it interesting! Layout (9/10)- From here. I love simple and elegant layouts and guess what? You have one! The entry is in a nice scrolling box with the invisible background that I love so dearly. The links are in a smaller box on the right side with the same background. A gorgeous sleeping woman [who reminds me of Gwen Stefani] is delicately blended into the white background. Of course, I can't let you off that easily. I do have a complaint! I despise writing across images. It makes them look...cheap. I think it would look better if it was just the image. I'm sure the writing has some meaning, but I just don't like it. Grammar and Spelling (13/15)- Grand. I saw a few mistakes, but nothing to get your panties in a twist. Schedule is spelled "scehdule" in your extras section. Updating (5/5)- I'm really tired of writing this over and over again. I don't take points away from this area, because I think it's a stupid thing to judge. Contacts (8/10)- Email. Tagboard. Notes Guestbook. Getting Around (10/10)- Simple. I like scroll boxes! Extra Things (5/5)- About Me. 102 Facts. School Schedule. Quizzes. Songs That I Like. The ABC's of Me I am... Why I'm Weird... Let Me Count The Ways. Marsha is. Cast. Reads. Links. Photos. Rings/Cliques. Reviews. Daily Cartoon. Surveys. Adopteds. Poll. P-O-Y. Current Read. Whew! Fun Factor (4/5)- I must say, it was a swell visit. Extra Credit (3/5)- +2 for the many thousands of extras. +1 because the girl in the layout reminded me of sexy, sexy Gwen Stefani. Total (92/100)- Comments- Change NOTHING! You hear me? Nothing! Reviewed by- Mandy |
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