2005-03-31 5:41 p.m.
Thewrongway.dx
Username/Diary Title [3/5] - Thewrongway - I love it. Simple, yet poetic and elegant. Very suitable for a diary username. this is me - I hate when titles aren’t capitalized. It looks sloppy. This title is OK but you could be much more adventurous.
First Impression [10/10] - The word smart comes to mind.
Content [39/40] - Unlike a lot of diaries I read, whether in review or just for fun, yours seems very real. You have a very down to earth and straight to the point style, which I expect very much reflects your personality. From the first entry I read I found something interesting about it, and this pretty much carried on throughout the review. I found some similarities in opinions between us, which I always love in a diary. I think many people would find something about you to relate to themselves. I especially liked how when telling a story you tended to say who the person was instead of just using their name. I wasn’t lost then.
Layout [30/30]- I love the blockquote border. It had a very antiquated and matches the rest of the layout. I am normally not a fan of brown as my school uniform was brown, but this works because of the image colour. It is smart and organised, very good for a diary.
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - It seems fine to me.
Contact [5/5] - Email, Comments, Guestbook. Fine. Think about putting them under their own heading.
Extra Things [5/5] - Some great ones. And very nicely organised.
Your song - I’m not sure. Probably something modern but also rustic.
Three Words - Individual, writer, passionate.
I think your diary title should be - I think your title works, but needs the capitals.
Your lyrical word of advice
Chemical-party-lover down
It's not the walls
It's not this town
You're just too high to see the point
You think your name is pass the joint
Gavin Degraw, Chemical Party
Extra comments: I did like your diary, and would probably check back. 5 points from request section.
Total Score -[102/100]
Reviewed by Gracie.
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