2003-12-19 10:03 p.m.
tear-fucked Content (40/40) - I love your writing. You write stories about a young girl. It's very hard to me to tell if you're telling stories about yourself or not and it has me wondering. I'm just going to shut up and give you full points. Is that good enough? Layout (2/10) - Very, very, extremely pink. There is a lot of pink there. Not that there is anything wrong with pink. You just have a lot of it. Design credit goes to pinkfreak, edited by you. I really think you should have left the navigation box as it was. The switch menu you have put in isn't working very well and looks rather messy. I really don't like it at all. Get a new menu system or try to fix this one up. I also suggest that you move your counter from above the menu to below at the bottom of the page. A counter isn't a very important part of a diary and neither should it be treated that way. Overall your layout is a rather bland design and the bright pink could certainly turn someone blind. I do like how you've edited it to suit your own needs though. After reading some entries I am really disagreeing with your layout choice. It doesn't match your writing style at all. I really suggest that you change your layout to suit. Grammar and Spelling (15/15) - All good! Updating (5/5) - So good, so far. Keep it up. Contacts (10/10) - IM details, notes, e-mail, guestmap and guestbook. Nice collection. Try to match your guestbook colors to match your diary. It would look a lot nicer. Getting Around (2/10) - As I mentioned before your switch menu isn't working to great. Get that fixed or change your menu style. Extra Things (5/5) - I'm not going to list them all here because you had a lot of extras. Great work. Fun Factor (5/5) - Again, I love your writing. Extra Credit (0/5) - Total (84/100) - Silver Award. Comments - You really have to let me know when you get a new template that doesn't hurt my eyes.. I'm going to add you to my buddy list. Yet again, I love your writing. Reviewed by - Abie previous | next |
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