2005-03-05 5:17 p.m.
tarynheart Username/Diary Title [5/5] - Tarynheart. Very cute and I’m assuming your name is Taryn…is it? And hey, guess what, my email is KIMBheart. Giggle. But I don’t think it’s along the same lines as your username. You should put a page up to give an explanation of what your username means, because I get the feeling that your name isn’t Taryn. Anyway I like your title too so everything’s tops. First Impression [8/10] - Pretty photo, pretty font, pretty layout. Simple and sweet. Content [35/40] - Entered this entry. I saw the poem and I thought “Bother a poet and cutter”, but then when I scrolled down I saw your little introduction. Very nice. You’ve got me intrigued. By the way, you should put up a “previous” and “next” links as it makes navigation a whole lot easier. You never ever need to blog about changing layouts . A waste of time. I liked this and this is my favourite phrase from you – “i'm a catastrophic teenager. avoid me.” Anyway, I’m going to click forward to your 2004 - 2005 entries. You sound just like me and me again. I think I could really relate to you. What I noticed was that you write REALLY well for a teenager, you express a lot and you seem so mature. What I don’t get though is as to why you feel like you need to cut so badly just to release the ‘pain’. I am a firm believer against cutting. Layout [28/30]- As I mentioned above, I do really love your layout, and half the credit goes to Vixi Designs. You did a good job with the image. The links are easy to find and I really don’t have a problem with this layout – except maybe it can be a tad bit plain. Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - Nothing wrong. All good. Contact [5/5] - MSN, AOL, Yahoo all present on your extras page – as well as email and notes. Check all. Extra Things [5/5] - I have not seem a few of your extras before and they seem pretty original to me. I loved the soundtrack and if I were the best. And you’re a pretty hectic artist too. Oh wait, I almost missed it, your cast page is DEFINITELY orginal. I love how you used lyrics instead of the usual “This is my best friend blah blah blah” to describe the person. You rock. Your song - Dancing in the moonlight by Toploader Three Words - Expressive. Young. Talented. I think your diary title should be- The title is perfect the way it is. Your lyrical word of advice - A verse from my all time favourite singer and my all time favourite song– hope you enjoy it. When I look in the mirror, the only one there is me Extra comments: Ali heart Kurt. I feel like you’re the type of person I would befriend straight away. No other way to say it. Total Score -[91/100] |
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