2005-05-31 4:40 p.m.
Sweet-Kel

Username/Diary Title [3/5] - Sweetkel - All I can think of is Keenan and Kel. That random American program. I suppose it is an OK name, although I wouldn’t choose it for myself. I just can’t let it go... - OK, nothing special.

First Impression [0/10] - The first entry I read has given me a very bad one. From the subject matter to the terrible grammar.


Content [1/40] I hate it. All this teenage angst that is being masqueraded like this is so common on diaryland, and is nothing more than just words strung together. I hate people that take for granted the fact that they are alive, and can do anything. You say in your bio that you feel like you have never accomplished anything in so many words. What do you expect at you age? And the negative attitude doesn’t exactly help you. Stop wasting your life moaning. You only get one go at it, and you don’t want to suddenly find you are 80 years old and still stuck in the past, do you.
Your archiving is terrible.

Layout [5/30]- You would get more marks if you didn’t have 2 different templates for your archives and your entries. Your template, while nice, doesn’t really match you. This is a bright, summery template that contrasts what you are all about. I prefer the template you use in your archives.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [0/5] - Abysmal.

Contact [2/5] - Just notes. You really need more than this.

Extra Things [3/5] - A couple of the norm.

Your Song - Something dark, very monotonous.


Three Words - Cloudy, confused, ungrateful.


I think your diary title should be - Updated more regularly.

Your lyrical word of advice


A boy just 13 on the corner for sale
Swallows his pride for another hit
Overpopulation there’s no room in jail
But most of you don’t give a shit
That your daughters are porno stars
And your sons sell death to kids
You’re so lost in your little worlds
Your little worlds you’ll never fix

Open your eyes - Staind

Extra comments: 5 points from request section.

Total Score -[19/100]

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