2005-03-24 8:32 p.m.
Sweet-cynic
Username/Diary Title [4/5] - Sweet-cynic - Quite multi dimensional. I can take this to mean a variety of things. I like it a lot. sleep to dream -
I wish you had capitalized. It is such a nice title almost ruined by that small mistake.
First Impression [10/10] - I am a pink fan, so you made a good one straight away.
Content [15/40] - I am not going to venture too much into the past, because, lets face it, there aren’t enough hours in the day.
The bra photo seems to be totally erroneous and pretty much voyeuristic. I also felt that even though this diary isn’t supposed to be for people in you day to day life, it is so precise with its stories and people that someone like me who doesn’t know you will have a hard time getting into the entries.
I do find some entries about your day-to-day life interesting too, but the interesting parts seem to be very much crowded by a lot of other stuff.
Layout [25/30]- It’s pink, I love that! I like the images too. It sort of represents the 3 areas of life in simplistic terms. I like the link dividers and that they match the images too. The grey links however could look better in black. I really like how your diaryring’s are done. You need to minimise the amount of links you have, the page becomes crowded.
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - It seems fine to me.
Contact [5/5] - Email, Comments, Notes, Guestbook. Fine. Put them under 1 heading otherwise they get lost in the links.
Extra Things [5/5] - I like ‘sorted‘.
Your song - Something quirky and thoughtful.
Three Words - Pink, caring, Articulate.
I think your diary title should be - I like the name you used.
Your lyrical word of advice
Big Girls do cry.
Big Girls don’t cry.
The Four Seasons- Big Girl's don‘t cry.
Extra comments: I did like your diary, as I say about many I review by the end, and would probably check back. 5 points from request section.
Total Score -[74/100]
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