2004-07-01 2:41 p.m.
stephielove Username/Diary Title [4/5] - I really like the username you used. Ordinary yet different, (I don't know how that's possible). The title loneliness seems to come up a lot in diaries, I don't find that unique. However, I guess it does show your emotion, and the way you feel. First Impression [8/10] - My first impression of the diary is, "Where's the nude gentleman?" It's a very cute and sexy layout. It matches the title, "loneliness" perfectly. The quote, "If only I could touch you..." seems really sweet, but a little too sensual. Other than that, I also love the colors. It goes very well together; the beige and maroon, gives it a sexual feel. I don't know if that's what your going for, but it's just my opinion. Content [38/40] - Reading your diary made me feel like you were actually talking to me. It's very open and honest, which is definitely something I look for in a good site/diary, also in a person. From the entries I've read, you seem to be going through a lot of problems and some mixed emotions. Your entries are really thoughtful and just straight-out to the point. When you hate something/someone you say it. My favorite part of your entries is this one, "I am unable to describe my faith right now. I have little hope for anything turning out well, but somehow I know the Lord is still there. I trust that everything will work out in the end, though I'm scared to see what 'work out' really means. I wish I could say I never question my faith, although I believe questioning is the only way faith is really strengthened. I look over my life, I look over what I have gone through and dealt with, and I see my faith shining through it all." You seem very faithful, I'm a very symbolic person myself, and I enjoy it. I think that you are a very strong person from what I've read. It seems that even if you're going through the toughest time, you seem to spill it out then come back to conquer it. Make it work. That's definitely a plus in my book. Layout [22/30]- I usually perfer diaries with self customs, but this one is an exception. It's a really simple layout, which is something I respect. Simplicity is best, less is more to me. The navigation is really easy to get around, very organized. The colors as I said before go very well together. Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [4/5] - Grammar is not a problem for you, I saw a little mispells here and there, but it's not that big a problem. Your writing style is really descriptive and realistic. I can picture almost everything you write. Contact [5/5] - I can contact you everywhere I guess, e-mail, guestbook, and notes is enough for me. Extra Things [4/5] - There's a lot of extras about you. I think that's for people who want to know more about you and your life. I love quotes! You've got some really good ones. My favorite one, "Is someone talking to me?" That's seriously hilarious. Three Words - loneliness, pain, and compassionYour Song- There You'll Be by Faith Hill Total Score -[95/100] + 5 (for linking) This was by far the only diary I've reviewed that got 100/100. Great job! Reviewed by Kelly previous | next |
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