2005-08-14 7:38 p.m.
Sickriotgirl Username/Diary Title [5/5] - sickriotgirl, well, that name says quite a bit about you. And as I read you’re first entry I see that it tells me exactly what you’re going through right now. Your diaries header is “Remember how my body tastes”. It’s an interesting header and I like it, it’s intriguing and after reading I understood how much it suits you. First Impression [10/10] - My first thought was, “Wow. I have a feeling this is going to be an interesting one.” Content [40/40] - I’m not going to make this out to be some kind of contest where the goal is to keep someone’s attention and you get rewarded for it. I suppose in essence that’s what this is but that’s not how I’m going to do this. You’re contents... they’re... they’re you. You open yourself up in your diary. At one point you say that your online diary is like therapy to you and that is an incredible way to look at it. You poured your heart out and after reading more than half of your diary I believe that I know you, I would even go as far as to say that I know you better than your friends know you. You didn’t hold back, you let the good, the bad and the ugly out. I’m proud of you, not many people can do that. You are true to what you believe and what you do in your diary. Your diary is obviously for you, you communicate to the invisible perfect listener and you do it well. Layout [30/30] - I’ve never seen this layout before. I think you picked a layout that goes well with your diary and your entries. There isn’t much that I can say besides that. Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - Congratulations! You’re better at grammar and spelling than I am so I have no choice but to award you full points. Contact [1/5] - The only way I have of reaching you is through your notes. I don’t think that’s enough. You don’t need to get as personal as email but I still think you should have at least one other option. Extra Things [3/5] - You have photos up here, which were interesting to look at. You hang out with some attractive people by the way, and you yourself, well, I’m envious. You also have reviews somewhere in there, I just can’t get to them unless I go through your archives, and 100 things about you. Your song - “Criminal” - Fiona Apple Three Words - Strong. Honest. Brutal. Your lyrical word of advice - You come around here Extra Comments - The very first entry that you have written in your diary took place over a year ago. So far I have only read you’re latest entry and your first entry. In the first entry you ever wrote you said “Karma is going to kick me in the ass someday” and in your latest entry it shows me that maybe it has. I hope you can pull yourself out of all of this and not let it become a problem to ruin you’re life with. As I said earlier, I feel like I know you and with knowing you comes a concern for your well being. This may sound scary or even cheesy but I’ll be thinking about you and hoping for the best. You’re strong, it’s obvious, I don’t doubt that you can keep yourself in check and know you’re limits. Total Score - [99/100] previous | next |
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