2003-11-19 10:45 p.m.
soul14 Content (35/40)- You write beautifully yet your words are lost to me because I have no idea what you're writing about. You need to explain things a lot more then you do now sot that the readers can feel more involved. You write so beautifully. So much emotion. Layout (8.5/10)- I didn't see any design credit anywhere so I'm assuming you made this yourself which is great. If this isn't so just let us know. It's a very simple layout. The use of div's is great. I only thought that the picture wasn't of a very good quality so I brought the overall look of the layout down a notch. But hey, if it works for you why not. I thought the style you had on your link mouseover wasn't a great idea. Your links need to stand out a little more. Grammar and Spelling (15/15)- Great job here. Updating (3.5/5)- Oh wow, you really need to archive your older entries. There are so many. Your updating skills aren't too great. Improvement needed. Contacts (10/10)- Notes, guestbook and e-mail. The main three. It would look a lot better if your guestbook layout matched your diary in at least some aspect. Getting Around (8/10)- Getting around was nice and easy. The only thing I was against was the mouseover style as I mentioned before. Extra Things (5/5)- You had lots of extras. Too many to list here. Great work. Fun Factor (2/5)- I'll say it again: your writing is beautiful. Extra Credit (0/5)- Total (84.3/100)- Silver Award. Comments- Happy Birthday for last week. Reviewed by- Abie previous | next |
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