2005-03-09 4:14 p.m.
Silverscorp
Username/Diary Title [4/5] - Silverscorp - I think of 2 things. A silver scorpion, or the star sign Scorpio. I like it. Come Away With Me - Love it. Very Norah Jones.
First Impression [10/10] - You are a Mama!
Content [40/40] - You are at such an important stage of your life. What with children and marriage all right there. You are at the point in your life that most girls dream of! I think that is why I enjoy your entries so much. They are natural and smooth, not forced or fake. I would definitely keep track of this one. Everything is just so exciting. The entry that I felt just summed up your life was where you talked firstly about your child, and then about your wedding rings. It combined the main parts of your life together. Lovely.
Layout [25/30]- The one thing that ruins the page is the counter. I know for a fact that you can either change the colour of it to a more pastel colour, or change it to a much smaller icon. It is much too bulky. Everything else seems fine. The picture of you is a little blurred, so maybe you could use a better quality one, and the actual entry text is a bit boring. Apart from that, everything seems fine.
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - It seems fine to me.
Contact [5/5] - Email, AIM, Notes, Guestbook. Fine. I also like that they are all under one heading.
Extra Things [1/5] - Only rings? And a baby counter? You could do with adding to these.
Your song - Baby Love by Diana Ross. Obviously.
Three Words - Mother, Wife, Writer.
I think your diary title should be - Something incorporating your current lifestyle, i.e. your child and marriage.
Your lyrical word of advice
I'm gettin' married in the mornin'
Ding dong! the bells are gonna chime.
Kick up an rumpus But don't lost the compass;
And get me to the church, Get me to the church,
For Gawd's sake, get me to the church on time!
My Fair lady- Get Me To The Church On Time.
Extra comments: Good Luck with your life.
Total Score -[90/100]
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