2005-07-06 6:03 p.m.
Shadow-watcher.dx

Username/Diary Title [3/5] - Shadow-watcher.dx - I imagine literally being surrounded by shadows. And then watching them. I like it. The Ripples of My Life - Love it. And it matches the template too!

First Impression [9/10] - I don’t particularly like reviewing diaries which aren’t diaryland because I don’t see the point. However your diary seems like one I would enjoy.

Content [30/40] I am so lost! I’m sorry, but I reading your entries and feel like I am reading random pages or a book in no order. may I suggest continuity?
Apart from this feeling, overall I do enjoy your entries. In many ways our writing style is very similar.

Layout [20/30]- Clear, concise, organised. Suits you and matches your style. The links at the top are off centre though, so either minimise them or get rid of some. And for Gods sake tidy up the bottom. Those big bulky links ruin the serenity.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - Seems OK.

Contact [3/5] - Just e-mail? NO, a mass of links at the end.

Extra Things [4/5] - The standard.

Your Song - Wish I by Jem


Three Words - Tidy, mixed, joined.


I think your diary title should be - In diary-x pending lists.

Your lyrical word of advice


Baby,
My ship is coming in.
Wish I - Jem

Extra comments: 5 points from request section.

Total Score -[79/100]

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