2004-02-15 10:49 p.m.
sanetwin Content (40/40)- I actually don't have any words to describe the way you write. After reading only a few entries I was completely captivated with everything you had to say. You write so honestly about what you think and feel and it's just a whirlwind of thoughts. You mostly write about thoughts and feelings, but you usually mix in the event that triggered the certain thing you were talking about, which is great. I hate reading entries with emotion, but no purpose. Your writing has a lot of depth to it. You're rather sarcastic and ligh-hearted with some fo the things you say and I like that, because it shows that you don't take yourself too seriously. I read [estimated] 20 entries back, but the first one I came across was this one and it is my favorite. Layout (9/10)- From here. Well, it certainly does go with the flow of your writing, doesn't it? I love the image. I like the neat design of the entry area. I have to say the counters and links at the very bottom would be better suited somewhere else. It just looks a bit untidy there. One minor complaint is where the "disclaimer" link and the THANKS section start, you could use a break. Everything kind of looks run together the way it is. I adore the layout though, I might possibly use it for my own diary if the mood ever struck me. Grammar and Spelling (15/15)- I found no mistakes. Updating (5/5)- Automatic. Contacts (7/10)- Email. Notes. Tagboard. Guestbook. Comments. Getting Around (10/10)- Simple. Extra Things (5/5)- Cast. Reviews. Analise. 200 Things. Surveys. Sanetwin [about]. Links. Disclaimer. Fun Factor (5/5)- You. Everything about you interested me. I'm not sure if that's fun, but I'm going to say it is. Extra Credit (5/5)- 5 points, because I like your personality, your excellent writing skills, your layout, and many other things. Total (101/105)- Gold Award. Comments- Except the minor things that I mentioned, I don't think you should change anything. Your diary is as perfect as one can be. Your writing is amazing and I think I just might add you as a favorite. I also hope things get much better for you. Just keep your head up and smile. I know it's not as easy as it sounds, but at least try. Reviewed by- Mandy |
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