2004-02-10 8:13 p.m.
rezzette Content (30/40)- Your entries usually have quite a bit of emotion, or at least your thoughts on what's going on in your life and not just a daily recollection of events. A lot of your entries are long and well, kind of pointless. My suggestion for that minor problem would be to start out your entries with a point and then let whatever you feel come out. You frequently interrupt what you're talking about with some random comment and get the reader's mind away from what you were saying. I found that somewhat annoying, but I can deal with it. You do have many well written entries, almost like poetry. I liked reading those the most. This is one of my favorites. It's a more recent entry, but you seem to be more aligned with yourself now than you were in the past. Layout (9/10)- I don't like this Michelle creature that seems to be gracing the airwaves these days, but props on choosing something that expresses your interests. I've seen this lyout a few times before, so it's nothing too original. The navigation is easy, the links work, the images work. Great. The only thing that I'm going to complain about is that when I scroll over a link it becomes invisible. It's a personal preference of mine to be able to see what I'm clicking on, but that's just me. Other than that, it looks nice. Very professional. Grammar and Spelling (9/15)- Sometimes you do, sometimes you don't. You use ellipsis A LOT. That's a habit you might want to break. You openly misspell "quizzes" in you navigation section. Tsk. Updating (5/5)- Frequent. Contacts (9/10)- Email. Notes. Guestbook. AIM. Getting Around (10/10)- No problems. Extra Things (5/5)- Rings. Quizzes. Surveys. Reviews. Extras. Pictures. Cast. Bio. Buddies. Millions! Fun Factor (5/5)- Your extras kept me amused for awhile and that dragon counter that shoots flame from it's nose gave me a few thrills. Extra Credit (0/5)- None. Total (62/100)- Comments- None. Reviewed by- Mandy |
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