2004-02-14 11:23 p.m.
primarybasic Content (35/40)- Your entries contained a lot of variety. One day you wrote a poem, the next you wrote about your day, and the next just some random thought or opinion. You write extremely well. I love reading a diary like yours, because you never know what's going to come next. This was an amusing entry to me, because I can totally relate to it. You have an interesting way of phrasing things that keep a readers attention. I would love to read more, but you didn't seem to have very many entries. This entry was interesting, also. Layout (6/10)- I find this pretty boring. It's a play on words of the "Lord of the Rings" phenomenon. The colors are bland, but they do match. I have to give you credit there.I'm assuming it's self-designed and such. It does have a certain professional touch to it and that assists in your writing. Since it obviously has something to do with LOTR, I'm assuming you like it and your layout is a way of showing that. I always like when someone designs a layout that's centered around a certain interest of theirs, so that gets you brownie points with me. I've never seen, much less reviewed a diary from here, so I'm not quite sure what the "norm" is, but I think all the links make it look way too cluttered. Plus, I'm betting you can't do anything about it, but the banner at the top is a bit distracting. Grammar and Spelling (14/15)- Blame it on my lack ADD, but I found no mistakes, but for the fact that nobody is perfect, I'm giving you 14. Updating (4/5)- Hm, you could be a little more consistant. Contacts (10/10)- ISM. Guestbook. Speakeasy. Email. AIM. Yahoo. Getting Around (9/10)- I think I did pretty good, not knowing much about the way modblog works. Extra Things (5/5)- Billions. I'm not even going to begin to list them here. Fun Factor (5/5)- You gave me a few giggles and your extras could probably keep me happy for awhile. Extra Credit (5/5)- 5 for having so many extras links. I think that's the most I have ever seen. Total (93/100)- Gold Award. Comments- I love the writing, but not the layout. If you want a better reaction from me, I suggest something a little more appealing to the eye. Brighter, happier, more original. Reviewed by- Mandy |
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