2005-09-11 1:50 p.m.
Orions-child.dx Username/Diary Title [2/5] - Orions-child. I love this name. It’s original and inspiring. I really like it. “under my tree is where i find my peace”. I don’t appreciate you diary title though. Kind of unoriginal and boring. Lame-ish... meh. First Impression [10/10] - My first thought was “Ooh, I like this. It looks pretty and well made. I like. I like!” Content [10/40] - Those are ten pity points right there. You lead me to believe that this diary would be good in the first impression. You lied. This diary is cut and dry every day spatter of vomit that happens when the only time you feel is when you feel like typing. Yucky. Yucky. Yucky. Get some emotion. PLEASE! Layout [28/30] - This layout is absolutely beautiful and I adore it. The only problem I have is not being able to see the scroll bar. Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [3/5] - Poor... where’s the capitalization??? Get some. NOW. Contact [3/5] - Tag and email. Little. Few. Poor. Extra Things [5/5] -TONS! You at least get full points for this. Your song - “Dare you to move.” - Switchfoot. Three Words - I think your diary title should be - Your lyrical word of advice - I dare you to move, Extra Comments -Yuck, yuck, yuck. I’m bored and down because of your poor diary. Ugh... five extra. Total Score: [67/100] Reviewed by: Sarah previous | next |
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