2005-05-24 4:23 p.m.
Onlytien

Username/Diary Title [5/5] - Onlytien - Your name, or at least a variant of it. I have never heard Tien before, but I like it. Tien; fairy spirit - It matches your template, so is good enough for me.

First Impression [5/10] - The simplicity of the template relaxed me, but the amount of links you have tensed me up again.


Content [5/40] There is practically nothing to read here. And all the latest entries are from 2003. Stop living in the last, write some new material! Your poetry is mediocre at most, and your actual entries are nothing more than glorified daylog. You don’t update nearly enough as you should to qualify for most reviews.

Layout [25/30]- You do not need this many links on your page. For starters, take away the links column. If people want to look at other diaries, they will look at your profile. Your review links should be on their own page, not with other links. The fact that you do not capitalize your links annoys me and shows sloppiness.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [3/5] - Grammar could do with some work.

Contact [5/5] - You have this correct.


Extra Things [1/5] - Links to others.

Your song - Everywhere by Michelle Branch. Don’t ask me why.


Three Words - Minimal, bored, sparse.


I think your diary title should be - Updated more than it is.

Your lyrical word of advice


And that face you paint is pressed
impressing most of us as permanent
and I'd like to see you undone.
The Swiss Army Romance - Dashboard Confessional

Extra comments: 5 points from request section.

Total Score -[54/100]

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