2005-08-14 7:27 p.m.
Onlydespair

Username/Diary Title [5/5] - onlydespair. The name I didn’t like so much, it’s a little too dramatic but it is original enough not to have some numbers in it so I’m giving you full points for that. “I know you well enough to know you’ll never love me”. Nice title. It goes with your name and I like it.

First Impression [10/10] - My first thought, “I think I’m going to like this.”

Content [40/40] - You did good. You followed through on what you told me on the first entry you’d written in this diary. You told me that you would fall apart in your diary, it would be your open, honest place to spill everything that is bothering you. I enjoyed reading your diary, I read every page. Of course there wasn’t that much and over the last three months you haven’t written but what you did write let me get to know you.

Layout [30/30] - This layout is fabulous and it’s so good for your entries and your style of writing. You did good.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - You’ve got the grammar and spelling things good and the vocab, well, you used a lot of different words so I guess this works, haha.

Contact [5/5] - You gave me plenty of ways to get a hold of you. Notes, email, AOL and Myspace, which I also looked at and also enjoyed.

Extra Things [5/5] - Okay, there is a crazy amount of things to do on your diary. So much that on would assume it would be horribly boring and awful to look through it all. This, however, is not the case. I really enjoyed your extras.

Your song - “Wreck of the day” by Anna Nalick.

Three Words - Freaking Awesome Diary!

I think your diary title should be - You’re diary title is wonderful as it. You don’t need help with that but if you were looking for a diary title that describes it I would go with something like, “Yeah, I’ve got problems but at least I deal with them! Besides, you’re just jealous because I’m much hotter and more fun and interesting than you so blow my behind.”

Your lyrical word of advice -

If you don’t know,
honey,
would you just say so?
I need this, honey,
more than I ever did.
If you don’t, don’t. - Jimmy Eat World.

Extra Comments - “This diary is the only place I can be completely honest. This is where I go to fall apart.” May I just say that I love that?
You put together a fabulous website here. We’re talking entertainment, sympathy, honesty, love, lust, hate. It’s all here wrapped up in your life. I really appreciated reading your diary. I like the kind of truth that you have and I want others to be able to use their diaries as a sort of therapy as well. Update soon, please? Pretty please?

Total Score: [105/100]

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