2004-02-12 7:52 p.m.
onesweetyear Content (30/40)- Hm, after reading a few entries I determined that you are pretty religious. Plus I read a few of your poems and they seem religious too. It's nice that you put a lot of focus on god in your life and I admire that. I, myself am not religious, but it's nice to expand my mind and read the thoughts of someone who is. I know a lot of people probably don't have the same view as I do about that, but I'm reviewing your diary, not everyone else. You write with plenty emotions, but at times I felt as though you were holding something back. You use internet slang [lol, btw, b4, etc..] wat too much in your entries. I really hate that, because I don't use it and sometimes I don't even know what some of it means. You have potential to express your thoughts and write in an interesting manner, you already do sometimes. I think with age it will grow and I would love to see how things progress in a few months/years. Layout (7/10)- You give credit to them. It's a pretty nice design. It reminds me of an old lady for some reason, but I know it's for "The Butterfly Effect" movie. I always like it when someone chooses a layout that represents something they like, so good job with that. I don't like the layout myself, but it's your choice. My only complaint [and the part that reminds me of an old lady] is the olive-brown background. I love the images though and the way things are set up. One question. Why are there ellipsis at the very bottom of the navigation? It's just there, it serves no purpose. Grammar and Spelling (5/15)- Tsk. Tsk. You could do a lot better. Try spellcheck and cut back on the dots (...) and other useless punctuation. Updating (5/5)- Regularly. Contacts (7/10)- Email. Guestbook. Notes. Getting Around (9/10)- Everything seems to be in working order. Why is the visitor counter under "navigation"? That doesn't seem right to me. Extra Things (2/5)- Profile. Poems in another diary. Another diary that was locked. Fun Factor (1/5)- Not much. Extra Credit (0/5)- None. Total (66/100)- Comments- I wish I knew how old you were! I looked through about 20 entries trying to find out and I never saw it. In some entries you seem 15-20 and in other's you seem 13-15. It got confusing. I think you should make a bio page. Reviewed by- Mandy |
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