2005-02-28 3:15 p.m.
Nypizzas2

Username/Diary Title [0/5] - Nypizzas2 - Means nothing to me. In fact, if anything, it would purposely make me not want to click. tuesday is coming... did you bring your coat?? - This is also very random. But I have a feeling that there will be a lot more randomness to come.

First Impression [10/10] - Yellow is in abundance here isn‘t it!

Content [20/40] - Well the first 2 entries I picked at random were one sentence job’s, like “Scrub’s is on today!" That is not interesting. In fact, I was uninterested in a lot of entries, only really finding solace here. And even then, only about 50% of the entry is even decent.
So I am skipping to later entries, and I did have a laugh at this. Fortunately, my first period went smoothly, and so didn’t evoke any kind of comical story. Many of your latest entries tend to actually be about something, rather than daylog. The subject matter may be a little out there, but it is better than boredom. The titles of your entries annoyed me.

Layout [10/30]- A lot of yellow. The picture is cute, but the space allocated is has been wasted. There is also way too much going on, what with all the extra bits along the sides. It doesn’t look good in 800 x 600 either. The font also seems a little unadventurous.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [4/5] - It seems to be OK, worse in the first year’s entries, but shows an improvement.

Contact [4/5] - I don‘t understand the point of linking your contact details in separate links, and then also having a contact link with other methods of contact. Put them all on one contact page, as you have a lot of links already.

Extra Things [4/5] - You do have quite a lot, but I think you lack originality here. Try to come up with some of your own.

Your song - There is a song out at the moment called “Get Random”. That would be your song.

Three Words - Random, expressive, wont-hold-back.
I think your diary title should be - You definitely need to incorporate the banana somewhere.

Your lyrical word of advice -


Now let them all fly off,
When it comes down,
It all comes down,
And you will not be found,
When it’s over,
It’s all over,
Even if I make a sound
-Robbie Williams, Misunderstood.

Extra comments: I think we are very similar. I am also very random with my subject matter.

Total Score -[52/100]

previous | next