2005-05-29 8:23 p.m.
Nocure.dx

Username/Diary Title [5/5] - Nocure.dx - What is there no cure for? I like your explanation, but I almost missed it. Make this clearer. End is a beginning in the end- I can sort of see a link between this and nocure. I like it.

First Impression [10/10] - The word mellow comes to mind. I think it is the colours.


Content [38/40] A somewhat stylised view of live and society. Very abstract at times, but at others very clear. Somewhat the beginnings of a great light novel, and I imagine a very popular one. I love how you describe some things in your entries, and as there is in all good diaries, a lot that I do not agree with. I imagine you would be interesting to argue with.

Layout [25/30]- Lovely colours, but I don’t think the image suits it. It is much too hard compared with everything else. Otherwise lovely.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - Looks good to me.

Contact [5/5] - You have this correct. I would advise a Guestbook instead of Guestmap.

Extra Things [5/5] - Loads, but disguised in an innocent looking link.

Your Song - Bridge over troubled water by Simon and Garfunkel.


Three Words - Creamy, sweet, sour.


I think your diary title should be - Reviewed in diary-x review sites instead of diaryland.

Your lyrical word of advice


Questions of science,
Science and progress,
Do not speak as loud as my heart
The Scientist - Coldplay

Extra comments: 5 points from request section.

Total Score -[98/100]

previous | next