2005-03-02 8:26 p.m.
Moonlitblack

Username/Diary Title [4/5] - Moonlitblack - It’s pretty. Makes me think of
Night time, and how even though there is moonlight, there s still darkness. - I would have liked it better without the < > around it. But nevertheless, it matches your template.

First Impression [0/10] - I can’t believe I am actually seeing this error.


Content [5/40] - Well, I have to say that it was a mixed bag for me. Some entries I read with haste, and interest. Other’s I read one line of and left. Others were literally only 1 line. I don’t know, I don’t find hearing about someone else's loves and relationships of much interest. Maybe because I don’t know you. Occasionally I read an interesting entry, and I think what made it interesting was that you weren't talking directly about yourself, but voicing your opinions about something. I like that kind of entry. I have just spotted why I don’t enjoy your entries, and it is definitely your age. You seem to think that you are much more mature than you actually are, and it shows in the way you type. I think I just got annoyed towards the end.

Layout [0/30]- I can’t believe you are a designer. This template is riddled
With mistakes. Firstly, you have random links in the navigation that do nothing, as is the case with the link between the last and next links. The image is blurred too. It needs to better quality than that. This needs a serious makeover.


Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [4/5] - Just the odd typo.

Contact [1/5] - Why are your contact links in your extras? They should be on the main page!

Extra Things [3/5] - Some interesting ones, mainly links. I liked your bio but hated your poetry.

Your song - Probably ‘1985’ by Bowling for Soup. The 1985 part wouldn't have any relevance, but I think of this diary when I listen to it.

Three Words - Young, creative, naive.
I think your diary title should be - A lot less ‘mature‘.

Your lyrical word of advice


We're not twenty-one,
But the sooner we are, the sooner the fun will begin.
So get out your fake eyelashes and fake I.D's,
and real disasters ensue, it's cool to take these chances.
It's cool to fake romances and grow up fast.

-Dashboard Confesional- Swiss Army Romance.

Extra comments: None.

Total Score -[16/100]

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