We give them away.

2004-04-18 9:32 a.m.
moi-bella

Username/Diary Title [4/5] - Moi-bella reminds me of a frog. I think there was a cartoon or something where a frog says "Bella." a lot. I could be wrong. I like it though, because it could be taken different ways. It's creative. I'll give you that. I'm not really feeling the "feel the wrath of the frog" though. It seems a little too immature and childish.

First Impression [7/10] - It's very blank and boring. It has Kermit the frog on it, so that's a plus.

Content [40/40] - You don't update frequently and just pop up with random things to say when you do. This is pretty annoying in some people's diaries, but not yours. I even have the habit of writing an essay when I haven't written in awhile and well, you don't. I like the way you speak your mind and body and whatever else feels like speaking. You're not a great writer [no offense], you're just really fun to read. I don't think you're going for the great writer thing though, I think you just write whatever jumps into your pretty little head and that's a good thing. Although in a few years you probably won't be able to look back through your diary and remember some of the more important things that hapened, you can look back on your personality and the way you used to be. I wish I knew how old you were. I searched, but never found it. If I had to gues I would say somewhere between 15 and 18. You just have that mid-teenage mindset. But, I'll get back to your writing. Most of your entries are a nice length, so I don't have to stick around for 15 minutes reading one entry, neither do I get finished with every entry in less than 20 minutes. Nice balance. You have a great diary, in my opinion. It's a nice, refreshing change from the suicidal kids I usually get stuck with. God, I can't get over the fact that you love ska. You are so cool for that. No one here likes ska. They suck. You do like it though, and that's so cool. I'm sorry. I ot caught up in your coolness, forgive me?

Layout [30/30]- Is it self-designed? I don't see a link to a designer anywhere, so it must be. I definitely like the way it focuses around Kermit the Frog. I love frogs. The layout is a wee bit too simple though, especially when your entries are shorter. Longer entries extend the length of the entry box and make the design seem more colrful and fuller, but one or two line entries make it look pretty boring. I think the link that are lined above the entry would look better on the side and without the underlines. It's just a personal preference. Why is Kermit's foot cut off? Is it the way the image is made? I still like it, but I always liked Kermit better with a foot. I give you props for using green, because not very many people can use that much green and get away with it. Actually, most people don't use green at all. I like this layout, mainly because it's different. Although there are a few things I would change, it's still a great design.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [3/5] - Fairly decent. I got a laugh out of you saying "needles to say", instead of needless.

Contact [5/5] - Email. Notes.

Extra Things [5/5] - Rings. Quizzes. 50 Things. Reviews. Art. Links.

Level of:
Angst: You are a somewhat anggsty teenager, but you don't dwell on it and for that I grant you a 3.
Depression: You get depressed occasionally, but who doesn't. I'd probably want to murder myself [or someone else] if they sliced off all my hair too. 4.
Happiness: You're a generally happy person. Suprise, suprise! I like you for it. A lot. 8.
Sociability: Hm, you didn't mention many people, nor do you have a cast page. Are you lonely? I'm assuming you are to an extent, but you can't be totally alone int he world if you go to shows, so you're a 5.
Boredom: I actually wasn't bored at all. You're a funny girl, who can amuse me anytime she pleases. Congrats. You get 0.
Selfishness: Nope. You're just not. 1.
Coolness: Definitely. You're freezing, sweetheart. You're also pretty and like ska music. Nifty. 10!
Musicality: Indeed. You mentioned going to shows, but never the bands that were there, which sucked, because I probably knew some of them. Anyway, great taste in music. 10, again!

Three Words - Sarcastic. Random. Unique.

Your song - She's Got The Look by - Guttermouth.

Total Score -[94/100]

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