2005-09-11 1:25 p.m.
Mathero

Username/Diary Title [5/5] - mathero. Mat-hero? Mather-o? I don’t get it. Maybe it’s an inside joke? Oh well. I suck it up. It’s original enough. Maybe you should explain the name somewhere? Give us a little more inside view of you? Lovely Imperfections. Lovely name.

First Impression [10/10] - First thought, “ This is about babies and a mommy. I can tell.”

Content [40/40] - I adore your content. You are so open and honest in your diary. For a while you had started a diary elsewhere for your issues that didn’t concern your children but obviously you found out that people want to know all of you, not just how you live life with your children, but everything so you chose to stick with just diaryland. I appreciated that choice.
You have problems just like any mother and newlywed would. But you handle them well. You don’t end up having and emotional break down and laying in bed for hours on end hating life and what you have. No, instead you wake up every morning and smile for your babies. I wish my mother had been that strong. Good for you. And also, good for you finding the therapy of writing it all down and getting it all out.
P.S. I adore how cute your daughters are. They’re both very precious.

Layout [25/30] - I originally started reading your diary about a week before I started college and got bombarded by things that I needed to do. At the time that I started you layout was pink with pictures of your children and your husband and you. I liked that layout. The only problem I had with it was that when your mouse scanned over the pictures it said “The book of Hunterpoo”, so I knew where you had gotten your layout made at least. I’m taking a point off for that.
Now you have a new layout which is very plain and impersonal. I like the layout.... but it doesn’t fit what you’re writing about at all. You are very, very, very personal in your diary. Your layout should be personal too. Maybe you should add a few of those old images back into the layout. That was really a stamp of you. I liked that. It suited it well. I’m taking 4 more points for the lack of you in the new layout.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - You’re good here.

Contact [5/5] - Girl, you could die and I would still have a way to find you. Look at this all: myspace, notes, aim, email. You’re good to go here too.

Extra Things [3/5] - You have plenty. I’m not even going to list them, haha.

Your song - I know this is going to be a little cheesy.... and I’m sorry... But you’ll hopefully look past the cheesiness and appreciate the song in it’s whole instead of just trying to kill yourself over the singers. The song is also the one your lyrical advice. I’m not naming it here.

Three Words - Strength. Smiles. Happiness.

I think your diary title should be - Lovely Imperfections.

Your lyrical word of advice -

My life was complete,
I thought I was whole.
Why do I feel like I’m losing control?
Never thought that I could feel like this.
You changed my world with just one kiss.
How can it be?
They’re right here with me.
There’s an angel, it’s a miracle.
N’snyc - “God must have spent...”

Extra Comments - I enjoyed reading your diary. Both times that I read it. It was a real treat and it was nice to read about how other people are doing out there. Extra five.

Total Score: [100/100]

Reviewed by: Sarah

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