2005-07-02 12:20 p.m.
Lostunderit

Username/Diary Title [3/5] - Lostunderit - I am undecided. I feel like I have been looking for something, then found it, and then said ’It was lostunderit’. OK, now I love it. [this is my HEART SHAPED BOX] - This could be so much better. Get rid of the square brackets and write it in normal case. It would be OK then.

First Impression [9/10] - We usually don’t review locked diaries but hey. Also, I would advise proofing your passwords because I could easily guess another combination to the one you gave me.


Content [15/40] At the moment I do not enjoy reading about other peoples relationships. I don’t know you or him, and so for me this is boredom. Like starting a book in the last few chapters. But some of the things I dragged though had a lot of nice language. I think that if the subject matter were any different then I would be inclined to give higher marks.

Layout [30/30]- I love the simplicity, and the heart links, but on your archive page your links have gone funny. Everything else is fine.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - Seems OK.

Contact [3/5] - Just notes?

Extra Things [5/5] - Lots, and links are on their own page too.

Your Song - OK by Atomic Kitten.


Three Words - Minimalist, loved, shameless.


I think your diary title should be - In Ikea.

Your lyrical word of advice


Here comes the rain again,
falling from the stars.
Drenched in my pain again,
becoming who we are.
Wake Me Up When September Ends - Greenday

Extra comments: 5 points from request section.

Total Score -[75/100]

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