2005-05-17 8:42 p.m.
lilmaly013
Username/Diary Title [2/5] - lilmaly013 - What does it mean? Your name or something? Explain somewhere. i heart my friends - I HATE it when diaries do not capitalise their titles. It looks sloppy. And this title isn’t exactly anything to rave about.
First Impression [0/10] - Why are none of your links capitalized? And why do you waste server space by having another diary for your links? What a waste of space.
Content [10/40] - Boring, boring, boring. I read a good number of entries but know only superficial amounts of information about you. You aren‘t a diarist, you are a blogger, a blogger to your friends. This isn‘t the type of diary that I would like to read, because I don‘t know you. More like a scrapbook if anything.
Layout [10/30]- You ruin it by putting a tagboard thingy in it. templates like this aren’t made to have bits added into it. It ruins the positioning of everything. Your links are a mess of internal and external. They all need to go under one ‘extras’ link. And stop linking to other dairies on the main page!
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [1/5] - No the best I have seen.
Contact [3/5] - Move them onto their own page to minimise space taken up in your layout.
Extra Things [5/5] - Standard ones.
Your song - Something that incorporates being young.
Three Words - Friend, clutter, bright.
I think your diary title should be - Anything but what you are currently using!
Your lyrical word of advice
Sometimes people come into your life
Like they're meant to be
And suddenly you've found someone
Who sees the world like you see
Friends Forever- No Secrets.
Extra comments: 5 points from request section.
Total Score -[36/100]
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