2004-02-12 9:34 a.m.
kamikazesoul Content (40/40)- This is my favorite entry. It took me about 10+ entries to get there, but I found it. You write amazingly well. I almost felt like I was reading a novel when I read some of your entries. Your vocabulary is fantastic. You have such a profound way of wording things and making them come alive. You don't really write about day-to-day things, but occasionally you slip it into the mix. It's not a bad thing, because you relate your feelings on the subject. A lot of your entries are very heartfelt [like the ones about Michelle] and that attracts random readers, I believe. I like how you don't definitely "spill the beans", so to speak. You sort of make a reader go back and investigate to find out what's been going on. I don't think I've ever seen that before, but it works for you. Layout (9/10)- Credits for design go to here. Exploding dog! I love exploding dog. What more can I say? Hmm, the layout goes really well with your writing. It's kind of depressing, but you seem to be depressed at times too. You're also pretty happy at times, and a good thing about this layout is that it's versatile. I like it, so it doesn't matter. I don't like the links way down at the bottom, in rows like that. I know that's the way the design site made it and you can't do anything about it, but it peeves me. Grammar and Spelling (14/15)- Thisclose to perfect. Updating (5/5)- Plenty. Several multiples. Contacts (7/10)- Notes. AIM. Email addresses. Getting Around (8/10)- All the links work, but like I said before, I'm not a fan of the way the navigation is set up. I have to scroll all the way to the bottom if I want to check something out. Extra Things (5/5)- Reviews. About me. A to Z me. Cast. Cast Page 2. Buddylist. Anime... gallery. Comments Fun Factor (2/5)- Hm, the exploding dog layout was fun to look at. Depressing, but fun. Extra Credit (2/5)- For the layout. Total (92/100)- Gold Award. Comments- Don't change a thing. It's all beautiful. Reviewed by- Mandy |
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