2003-09-11 5:18 p.m.
jenamae Content- (30/40) Your entries are dull, there isn’t a lot of interesting things in them. You have plenty of emotion though. I just suggest that you write about more interesting things then your day, maybe more interesting thoughts. Layout- (10/10) It goes with you, even though you say in your disclaimer that you plan on changing it. I am not one for pink but like I said, it fits. Grammar-(13/15) Sometimes it’s kind of hard to understand what you are trying today. It seems like you have too many words, or too many commas in some places. Updates- (2/5) You update for days in a row and then you stop updating for a week or more, that needs to stop. Contacts-(11/10) You have all the stuff people need to get to you and plus some. Getting around-(10/10) Very easy. Extra stuff- (5/5) Quizzes, reviews, bio, disclaimer. Fun factor-(0/5) No fun for me. Extra credit- (0/5) Total -(81/100) Comments- Get more interesting and that’s the only problem I have with things. I would also like to say that I could have swore I posted this review about 4 or more days ago, but it isn’t showing up on the site so here it is again, sorry for the delay. Reviewed by- Sarah. previous | next |
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