2004-02-10 1:18 p.m.
intoxicated-dreams Content (35/40)- Most of your entries are short and sort of poetical. You ocasionally write a longer entry about your day or some event that's going on, but most of your entries consisted of 2-6 lines. I read quite a lot of your entries, because of how short and easy they were to comprehend. I wish I could have understood what you were talking about with some of the shorter entries, but because you don't really talk about your life I had to imagine. It's good that you're not a daylogger who tells every detail of their life, but a little detail wouldn't hurt. I did enjoy reading the shorter, more philosophical entries. Since I didn't know what was really going on, I could apply them to my own life and that always attracts readers, because it gives them something to identify with. My only suggestion would be to add a little more about what's going on in your life and not just your thoughts on it. Layout (8/10)- It's a pretty awesome self-design. It reminds me of Fefe Dobson, I'm not sure if that's her or if it's even related to her, but it reminds me of her. I feel like I've seen this somewhere before, which makes me think someone might have stolen it from you since you claimed to have self-designed it. I personally wouldn't use it, but it seems to suit your writing. I don't particulary like the way the entry scrolls, but that's my preference. It's really great for a self-designed layout compared to some of the ones I've seen before. One complaint I have is the main scrollbar. Add some sort of color so it can be seen. Otherwise, people may not know that it's there. Grammar and Spelling (10/15)- Sometimes you punctuate and capitalize, sometimes you don't. Your spelling was decent and grammar too. Try to keep a pattern in the way you write. Updating (4/5)- In 2003 you updated pretty regularly, but you've slacked off a bit lately. Contacts (5/10)- Email. Guestbook. Tagboard Getting Around (10/10)- Perfect. Extra Things (5/5)- Profile. I-mood. Guestbook. LJ. Cast. Tons more! Fun Factor (5/5)- All the extras kept me bust for awhile. Plus, your writing made me think. Extra Credit (5/5)- Full points for all the extras you had. Total (87/100)- Silver Award Comments- Add a bit more about yourself and possibly add the tagboard to a separate page or to the "extras" page. Fix the scrollbar. Reviewed by- Mandy |
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