2003-08-28 8:56 p.m.
innocentmess Content (35/40)- Your diary is pretty interesting most of the time. You can be funny, serious or thoughtful, it all depends on your mood. You write well. You do talk about your day sometimes, not that it's a bad thing, but you also add thoughts to it and you talk about other things too. Layout (5/10)- The image on the top works inconsistently. When I started reviewing, it didn't work. While I was reviewing, it worked. And when I was finishing, the image was broken again. Anyway, when the picture didn't show up, the layout was blah. When it actually showed up, it really isn't much better. The words on the left is so big, long and very very distracting. If it only had the image and the words "choose your future. choose life" it would be fine. The orange and table and white background with black font matches fine however. It's by lucky designs. Grammar and Spelling (15/15)- Your grammar and spelling are good. You capitalize, and I didn't find any internet short hand. You also paragraph your entry well. Updating (4/5)- Almost everyday with occasional skips of a few days. Contacts (10/10)- There are five ways to contact you: email, notes, aim, yahoo and guestbook. Yay! Getting Around (9/10)- Getting around your diary was easy and simple, since the navigation is easily found on the left side of the page. There are some broken things in your diary though, like on your pictures page. Make sure you check around every so often to see everything is still working well. Extra Things (5/5)- poems, pictures, diary rings, links, sitemeter. Fun Factor (3/5)- Your diary is good, but I couldn't relate much. I do like your poetries though, they are good. I especially like this one. Extra Credit (0/5)- nope. Total (86/100) Comments- good job, continue writing, especially poetry and make sure you get the image for your layout fixed :) Reviewed by- Ali previous | next |
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