2005-07-02 2:24 p.m.
hushangelz Username/Diary Title [2/5] - hushangelz.. hush angels? As in "quiet angels"? Or "Shut up angels"? I don't really get it. And I can't find it explained anywhere. You have captured my heart and soul - pretty. Not toally in love with it, but I don't hate it either. First Impression [9/10] - Looks like you're in love. And with the small bio, I see you're 24. Which should make for good reading. I'm feeling a sense of relief, but jealousy - especially if you talk a lot love. Content [35/40] - I started with the earliest entry in 2005. Quickly I'm finding myself relating to you. Quite often you update with very short entries, stolen moments at work it seems like. I understand a few here and there, but it seems to be your M.O. I love your musings on life, and what it all really means, such as here. You seem to hold back ALOT. The loss of a parent is hard. Everyone is different, but you're way of dealing seems to be to shut it out. Wish you let the emotions out. It's healthy. You have a great sense of humor though, it oozes out in your writing. Layout [22/30] - Simple and clean, for the most part. My first compliant is that the layout doesn't look it's best in Mozilla (my default browser). I always check in IE, just to make sure. And it does look better in IE. In Mozilla the border boxes do not expand to the size of your writing, and the links colors are blue, purple, and red. Rather then the purple, I think the links would look better in a blue or green tone, something that matches the images better. I really don't like links all jumbled together. On an otherwise good page, a blob of links is messy. I'm really not crazy about the font on the image, but the actual images are cute. Overall, the browser issue and links are all that bug me. Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [4/5] - Very few typos, and you have a great vocabulary! Contact [5/5] - Email, notes, guestbook. Stalkable enough for me. Extra Things [1/5] - Well, there's not much there. I like your 101 things (even though there's only 97), but it feels a little lacking of stuff. Maybe a cast page? photos? Your song - A realistic love song. Three Words - Insightful, Mature, and Humorous. I think your diary title should be - hopefully something that deals with "happily ever after". Your lyrical word of advice -
extra comments: I was actually amused by the fact that you were named after one of Charlie's Angels. I was too. I was named after Kate Jackson, my mom admitted it when I was picking out names for my own child. (haha) Sometimes it was as though I was reading my own thoughts. I too have an manipulative ex bf named Josh, who is often reffered to as "Shithead" among many other things. I also relate on the loss of a parent. It is really hard, I hope you are dealing well. +5 from the request section. Total Score -[83/100] previous | next |
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