2003-11-15 4:19 p.m.
hisgirl- Content (40/40)- As always one of the first entries I read is the Cast page. I really liked the way you described everyone on your list. You said so much about a person in only few words. Nicely done. I really enjoyed reading your entries even though it was mostly about your boyfriend Cory. This line was rather heart-warming: "I picked out my favorite one and kissed it, but couldn't help leaving the others out, so I kissed them too." Most of your entries are about what you did that day, your feelings and your boyfriend. Normal teenage stuff. It's great to see that you can write in such a way so that the reader doesn't get bored. Layout (8/10)- This layout was designed by you and is rather unique. You use a lot of purple and have an oversized picture heading your diary. This picture took a while to load up on my internet speed and with my screen resolution (800 x 600) it was rather big, too big. The story behind that picture was interesting though. Its a rather simple layout which I love but I do think you could change a few things. Firstly the size of that header picture and secondly the size of your tag-board. Other then those things everything else was grand. Your navigation links down the right hand side looked particularly tidy. Grammar and Spelling (15/15)- All good here. Updating (5/5)- You've only just started this diary and so far your updating is pretty good. Contacts (10/10)- AIM, e-mail, notes and guestbook. Lots of variety here. Getting Around (10/10)- Your navigation links were arranged neatly down the right hand side. They were easy to read and get around with too. Extra Things (5/5)- Cast, bio, rings, wishlist and links to other sites. Fun Factor (5/5)- Reading your feelings of happiness with Cory were heart-warming, so I suppose I could call that fun. Extra Credit (0/5)- Total (98/100)- Gold Award Comments- I really enjoyed reading your diary. Keep up the great work. Reviewed by- Abie previous | next |
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