2005-05-30 3:45 p.m.
Given-A-Soul

Username/Diary Title [3/5] - Given-a-soul - It is OK, but technically aren’t we all given a soul? Maybe you feel you have been given a new one. It has many levels. Regretfully Yours...- You could have done better here, it is very cliched.

First Impression [0/10] - I hope the content is better than the template. Otherwise this will not be a fun review.


Content [8/40] My God, will you please archive. This is beyond a joke. And the fact that you haven’t given all of your entries titles just makes this page look awful. And what I have read I am not all that amazed over. it is a lot of poetry and prose, but looks more like bluff. Like you are only writing what you think sounds good poetry. like it means nothing. There is no real feeling in it, it seems false. I feel I know less about you than when I started.

Layout [5/30]- Blood red and black technically go together, but this template is too dark and devious for my taste. The positioning is all off and looks lopsided. The image is nothing short of frightening.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - About the only good thing.

Contact [5/5] - Just notes. You really need more than this.

Extra Things [1/5] - None, just a couple of links.

Your Song - Something dark and dreary.


Three Words - Farcical, closed, shrouded.


I think your diary title should be - Given a new lick of paint and have the lights fixed.

Your lyrical word of advice


You're hiding from me now
There's something in the way that you're talking
The words don't sound right
But I hear them all moving inside you, go
I'll be waiting when you call
Fall At Your feet - Busted

Extra comments: 5 points from request section.

Total Score -[32/100]

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