2005-08-14 6:51 p.m.
Funkyfresh06

Username/Diary Title [3/5] - funkyfresh06. Okay, you’re graduating in ‘06 and you’re funky fresh? Hey, whatever works for you. Aack! You’re title is simply your address? Not cool. You can change that simply by typing in what you want your header to be at the top of your html code where it says < title> % % username % %< /title >. I suggest you do that.

First Impression [5/10] - My first thought upon entering your site was “Oh no... what have I gotten myself into... and what the heck is... school started? Huh? I’m so confused.” Next time you post something like a counter, make sure you add an entry after that so unsuspecting passerby’s don’t feel like they don’t even want to bother and that they never want to come back to your site again.

Content [10/40] - I’m sorry. I am so horribly sorry but I can’t read this. It is the most boring thing... Oh, I just can’t put myself through it any longer, 12 entries was enough. I’m sure you enjoy writing it because, wow, do you write but I can’t read it. My eyes were starting to blur and I started getting a head ache and I felt as though I was going to have a panic attack.
All you wrote about was what was going on in your life. There was no emotion in it. It was bland and lifeless. I have no idea what’s going on in your head as you write these entries. Maybe you have a memory problem and need to review things later to make sure you remember later? If so, I’m sorry but if not, I’m even more sorry.
Please, let your diary be a diary. Put yourself into it. Breath through your diary, let it become a place where you show the world who you really are because to me, the reader, all you are is a boring school girl with too much time on her hands and way too much studying to do.

Layout [15/30] - This layout says nothing about you. So I’m giving you 15 points because it matches what you write about. I want to see something unique and interesting when I go to someone’s diary. I want to feel them in their layout... and I don’t feel you.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - I can’t deny that you know your grammar and spelling. You’re vocab is pretty strong, too.

Contact [5/5] - You gave me notes and guest book. I suppose that’s enough.

Extra Things [5/5] - Favorites, cast, rings, reviews, little survey things, ten goals, pictures that aren’t working currently.

Your song - “There’s gotta be more to life” by Stacy Orrico. You know there’s more to life. Go find it.

Three Words - Get. Some. Emotion.

I think your diary title should be - Very little funk and not so fresh.

Your lyrical word of advice -

Are you gonna waste your time
standing in the back,
looking around?
Gotta make a move or you’ll miss out.
Praise Chorus - Jimmy Eat World.

Extra Comments - I hope that you don’t take what I said to mean that I think you’re a boring loser or anything. I just wish you would put more emotion into your diary. It is a diary, after all.
Extra five added.

Total Score - [53/100]

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