2005-05-18 8:30 p.m.
Fr3nzy
Username/Diary Title [3/5] - fr3nzy.dx - So Frenzy. I like frenzy, but not fr3nzy. The 3 is pointless! ... a wistful flower - I hate when titles are not capitalized. It is sloppy. It matches the template, and is quite pretty; I'll give you that.
First Impression [0/10] - I am not a diary-x fan, and simply cannot see what is wrong with review sites in your own host.
Content [20/40] - Firstly, I am impressed with your archiving.
As for your entries, I am undecided. In some ways I like your entries. They are like little flowers. But that fact of the matter is that you write as if every person reading will know you personally, which I do not. You have way too many entries for me to read all of them, but from what I read, I felt the same all the way through. You need to work out whether you are a diarist or a blogger.
Layout [28/30]- The only thing that bothers me is the Chatbox makes the whole template much too long, and distorts the page. This should be on its own page and then linked. Otherwise your template is lovely.
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [55] - It seems fine to me.
Contact [35] - Just the Chatbox.
Extra Things [25] - Not many, and as I am not a diary-x user, the unlock means nothing to me.
Your song - Something happy and cheerful.
Three Words - Pretty, shiny, friend.
I think your diary title should be - In the diary-x review site pending lists.
Your lyrical word of advice
Hey you, I beg you not to laugh
Cause I despise myself
I need somebody else
To tell me that I'm stupid
Or maybe even cool
I'll leave it up to you
I Wanna Be Your Friend - Nuno Bettencourt
Extra comments: 5 points from request section.
Total Score -[66/100]
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