2004-04-20 7:09 p.m.
eroticxcries

[end of the road]


Username/Diary Title [1/5] – umm the username eroticxcries, I have no idea what the hell the “x” stands for. Umm makes no sense. And erotic cries make me think sexual cries??? But the diary isn’t a sex one. I am confused. Title [end of the road] um sounds depressing. SO you got that kicky username then a depressing title.

First Impression [4/10] – First thing I think is Omg get a template geez. She still has the plain lack and white diaryland one. And she has had her diary for almost a year. Don’t you think it’s time to work on that????

Content [37/40] – Okay, the writing isn’t boring but it isn’t exactly worth waiting for. Most of the entries are pretty short. And the no titled entries irritate the hell out of me. I can’t stand that. I mean you gotta title them. But if you choose not to, that ain’t my business. But I will admit I did like reading it. I especially loved the “BLARGH. I'M GOING TO FUCKING SHOVE A DILDO DOWN YOUR THROAT, AND I HOPE YOU CHOKE TO DEATH. ^_^ Ergh! I want to be annoying. -goes to be annoying.-” It made me laugh! And not many diaries can do that.

Layout [5/30]- Okay although layouts aren’t the most important thing in a diary. But I mean to have a diary for almost a year and still have the diaryland template is not only lazy, it’s pathetic. I feel bad that you asked for a review with the diaryland built in template. Maybe you should fix your diary up a bit, then apply for a re-review. The layout is neat and simple I’ll give you that much. It has FOUR links and is black and white, it doesn’t even say anything about you!...

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [4/5] – Here I don’t see many typing errors, I mean I know I don’t ALWAYS type like the perfect typist, but I did see pretty good grammar. She spelled alright, and the vocab was okay. I mean there was a few times I saw like internet slang and stuff but I’ve got nothing against that.

Contact [1/5] – The only contact link is the “contact me” which connects to her email. But that is the only form of contact. Umm I think there should be others. Like a few others. There isn’t even notes.

Extra Things [0/5] – There isn’t a single extra. I mean where is there even room for links on a diaryland template. Extras please me, and I don’t see any…disappointing. ^.^

Level of: This is where we determine the levels of certain things in your diary. [on a scale of 1-10]

Angst: Umm I give you an 8 on this. Your entries make your life seem so dramatic.

Depression: umm for the depression I give you a 4. Like you seem only somewhat depressed. Happiness: I don’t think I saw hardly ANY traces of happiness after reading almost 30 entires. I give you a 3.

Sociability: You seem somewhat social, not popular not an outcast. So I give you a 6.

Boredom: Umm you don’t seem TOO bored, but then again a lot of your entries aren’t all that long, so what is there say??...SO I give you a 7.

Selfishness: You definetly don’t seem selfish from what I read. 1.

Coolness: You don’t reach a high on my cool factor but you don’t hit a dead low. You seem pretty cool though. 5.

Musicality: Honestly all the music you even mentioned was umm crap I’ve never heard of… Which obviously doesn’t raise you very high on my scale. 3.


Three Words – Umm I would say M I A, missing in action, no just kidding. Three words I say upset, content, depressing.

Your song – I dedicate song “the first cut is the deepest” by um sherly crow, or whatever that country singers name is.

Total Score -[52/100]

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