2004-06-17 6:39 p.m.
exhausted-faith Username/Diary Title [4/5] - I really like the username you used. It's very unique and different. It kind of shows your personality a little. Maybe you're tired of all the wait, stress, trying to hold on kind of thing. First Impression [7/10] - Your site has a very dark and mysterious look and feel to it. It keeps people guessing what's hiding under all the darkness. It looks very well organized and layed out. I love simplicity, so yours is definitely one. Content [36/40] - From the entries I've read, it seems like you're going through a tough time right now. You seem really lonely and sad. However, out of the sadness, I can actually picture you happy because of the things you right. You love yourself to much to hurt yourself. That's a sentence that's really realistic. I like this part of one of your entries, "Sometimes when all is dark and silent and I'm lying on my bed, I would tear for some particular reason, and suddenly everything that I found depressing or upsetting would overwhelm me and I would tear even more." It sounds really poetic, and very wise. Also, "It's a really heavy burden weighing me down constantly, and although I don't usually let it bother me, sometimes the realisation would suddenly slap me in the face and I would still be depressed by it. I don't know why teenagers like us should be bothered by all these so-called assessments. Why can't they just make our lives easier?" It's something that I think, everyone goes through. I think writing like this can actually solve your problems. Layout [23/30]- I think it's excellant that you design your own layouts. That's definietly a plus. Nothing better than your own design, isn't it? I think your layout is very plain and simple, which is something that I respect. I really hate it when I go to a website and there's so many things going on that I just have to click that little box in the corner to get rid of it. However, I think your website layout is very alluring. It's not boring or complicated, it's just plain simple. Which is the best thing, for me at least. Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [4/5] - Grammar is not a problem for you, I saw a little mispells here and there, but it's not that big a problem. Your vocabulary is pretty much average, but you used a lot of descriptive words. Which is great to help your readers visualize what you're trying to say. Contact [5/5] - I can contact you everywhere I guess. You have e-mail, guestbook, notes, and aim. You’ll probably be at one of those places when someone needs to reach you. Extra Things [5/5] - You have a lot of extras for your guests to enjoy, and that’s pretty good. It's also good to let your readers know what you're interested in, or reading.
Level of: Three Words - upset, depress, and content Your Song- White Flag by Dido Total Score -[84/100] Reviewed by Kelly previous | next |
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