2004-02-16 8:51 p.m.
evilwizard6 [re-review]
ALESS :I will, I will Rock You: Content (35/40)-I began reading at the very first of January, because obviously I wasn't going all the way back to August of last year. Some of your entries are long some are short, mostly long. You write with a lot of variety. Not the same day-to-day bullshit. I enjoyed reading your more emotional entries, because you don't seem to be a very emotional person and if you are, you hide it well. Obviously, you like sports and several entries are centered around you and your sports fascination. I'm not one for sports, so I didn't really get into those entries. You seem like a very interesting person and if I could relate to you and your hobbies I would probably enjoy your diary a lot more. You're a very unique person, in my opinion, and I think that's what kept me around for awhile.I even highlighted te area the soccer ball distorts so I could read what you had to say.
Layout (7/10)- Another self-designed layout. This one is much better. Hm, I don't know what I tihnk. I don't know what the words at the top by the picture are from either. Why is there a soccer ball down there. Okay, so the more I look at this, the more I don't like it. It's sort of confusing. It's a nice design, and I like the colors. The little image and "I Will Rock You" quote at the tops is even okay, but why the soccer ball? Maybe it's something I don't understand. Anyway, I like the way the entry area is set up, with the "border" in the top left corner. The links are set up well too. I just don't get what the layout is about, other than that I really have only one complaint and that is the font over the soccer ball is hard to read. Just get rid of the soccer ball.
Grammar and Spelling (13/15)- Nice.
Updating (5/5)- Going agaist the system, rewarding everyone with free points.
Contacts (7/10)- MSN. Yahoo. AIM. Guestbook. Notes.
Getting Around (10/10)- Great.
Extra Things (5/5)- Links. Bio. Disclaimer. Facts. 337 Things. Surveys. Many more.
Fun Factor (5/5)- Well, I guess you could say I had fun.
Extra Credit (3/5)- For the unique extras you had.
Total (90/100)- Gold Award
Comments- Just get rid of the soccer ball. Your writing was exactly my style, but if I were more like you I would enjoy reading it.
Reviewed by- Mandy
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