2005-02-25 5:52 p.m.
drawtheline Username/Diary Title [5/5] - drawtheline sparks some sense of profoundness. Very original also. First Impression [10/10] – LOVED IT straight away. I don’t know what’s making me feel this way but I’m just getting a really really good feeling about your blog. I think it is simple, not overdone, yet very deep. Content [40/40] – My first suggestion would be to archive your entries, since you have over a thousand of them, archiving would make it much easier to look through. So anyway, I started with this entry, and I must admit, you got me intrigued through one simple sentence. I like the fact that you have this way with words and expressing yourself. You sentences flow and they do seem really genuine. Some of the times I find you highly amusing, even though I’m not sure if I do truly understand the humour… or maybe you weren’t even being funny. Hah. This entry is my favourite so far. It’s very provoking. And I could actually comprehend this entry. Suicide is immoral and I agree with everything you say. Wow I’m definitely starting to admire you now And this sure explains a lot. I was starting to think how your entries just sounded so much like a collection of poems and this entry just made everything clear. I don’t know if I should just skip your entries to the next year or so. Actually I will skip because I already know how good your content is. By the way, I was just wondering why you don’t include your short descriptions on your entries. Is it for any specific reason? Dude, I was able to feel your frustration and god, I just can’t say anything else but I ABSO FREAKING LUTELY LOVE YOU. Layout [28/30] - I’m assuming that you designed the layout yourself since I can’t find the ‘design’ link anywhere so well done to you cos the layout is surprisingly simple yet brilliant. And you know what the amazing thing is? It actually looks good on Mozilla Firefox and I’m just so damn happy that I can view your entries without gagging at the layout. Blue and white on black is okay, not so brilliant, just okay. The font is perfect size I guess and everything seems to be organized neatly. I honestly don’t have a problem with your layout - except that it could do with a revamp. I don’t know, it just seems a bit plain, but it still works for you. So whatever. Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] – There is nothing I can see wrong with your English, except for a few minor typos but that’s understandable. Plus, you have the most exquisite and expanded vocabulary I have ever seen. Honest. Contact [3/5] – Hm…you have a notes page, email, and AOLIM name on your profile. Maybe you should put in a guestbook or a comments page. Extra Things [1/5] – None…sadly. Oh wait I see a profiles page, which doesn’t really tell me much about you anyway. So far I don’t know any of the facts and figures about your life, and that yeah just sucks because I want to know more. Your song – Sway by the Lost Prophets – just because I feel it suits you in a sweet way. Three Words – Perfect. Intelligent. Charisma. I think your diary title should be – nothing else. Your diary is perfect. Your lyrical word of advice - no one said it was gonna be easy, and I'm not afraid to try. With the odds stacked up against me I would have to fight. One life, one chance gonna do it right. - H2OIsn’t it rather ironic that what I’m putting up in this section was copied from what I saw in your own blog here extra comments: You rock!
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