2005-05-20 10:51 p.m.
Chasmosis.dx
Username/Diary Title [5/5] - Chasmosis - It has a ring to it. It reminds me of osmosis from my old Science classes. The Mind’s Direction - finally, a diary with their title capitalized!
First Impression [1/10] - Honestly, I wasn‘t looking forward to this review, I got a negative vibe from you. Maybe I will be able to work out why by the end of the review. Maybe it is the LATA DAYZ bit.
Content [20/40] - It is interesting. Some entries are a snoozefest from the beginning. Others are touching in an outsider sense. The part that annoys me is this constant sharing of what i can only assume is some kind of dialogue, whether live, or on some kind of IM. Especially since I don’t know any of the people who you are talking about.
Layout [15/30]- Confusing link structure you have going on at the bottom. All I can think is that it is disorganised. I do however like the overall simplicity and minimalist standings. The white suits you.
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - It seems fine to me, except why is weird spelt wyrd?
Contact [1/5] - Only comments? This needs improving.
Extra Things [2/5] - Only links to other areas.
Your song - Perhaps Imagine by John Lennon. I think it is the white.
Three Words - Clear, insightful, touched.
I think your diary title should be - In the diary-x review site pending lists.
Your lyrical word of advice
And that face you paint is pressed
impressing most of us as permanent
and I'd like to see you undone.
College night will draw the crowds.
Dorms unload & your heading out.
Here is your moment to shine.The Swiss Army Romance - Dashboard Confessional
Extra comments: 5 points from request section.
Total Score -[54/100]
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