2005-02-23 4:56 p.m.
Bree.dx Username/Diary Title [1/5] - Bree - A bit unadventurous if you ask me. You could have done better than that! + and anything but ordinary + - I don’t like the plus’ and I don’t like that you don’t capitalise. It makes it look messy. First Impression [10/10] - The word ‘clean’ springs to mind, because it is organised, and there aren’t bits everywhere. Content [35/40] - I found some of your entries, specifically the latest ones very repetitive. They are all dedicated to you questioning yourself and decisions you have made. Mainly decisions to do with your boyfriend, or at least who I can gather is your boyfriend. Your thoughts on S & M were interesting, especially as you aren’t being explicit, but tasteful. I understand that this person has a lot to do with your life at the moment, but not knowing you makes these entries very mundane and repetitive. Bear that in mind. Layout [22/30]- I really like the image, it has that feeling of longing and endlessness. The things that I don’t like, are the size, colour and font of the text. White, small writing tends to just blend in to either the background, or into the other words. I also don’t like that none of the links have capital letters. I like the archiving set up. Is this a diary-x thing? Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [3/5] - It seems to be OK, except in some entries you don’t use correct grammar and your punctuation is bad. Contact [5/5] - Loads, and links to other diaries. Extra Things [5/5] - Lots. Your ‘about’ page is very informative and a good place to refer to. Your song - I cannot think of a specific song, but it would definitely be some kind of love sing. Three Words - Caring, emotional, descriptive. Your lyrical word of advice - I feel like this is more how I see your feelings in your diary.
Extra comments: In general I did like your diary, however I think there is only so much you can take of other people talking about their loves. Total Score -[61/100] previous | next |
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