2005-06-01 6:15 p.m.
Anime-Lady

Username/Diary Title [2/5] - Anime-Lady - I really don’t like your username. I hate anime, and your username just oozes immaturity. Building Castles in The Sky - It is OK, but has no relation to your diary.

First Impression [0/10] - Your template doesn’t work in my common 800x600 resolution.


Content [15/40] My God, will you please archive. There is nothing worse than a massive list of entries that you can’t differentiate from. You haven’t got that many entries in comparison to how long you have been writing, and to be honest, I am very undecided as to whether I like you or not. You day-log like crazy, which is boring because I don’t know you. However, occasionally I do sense a kind of life in you that I like. I can’t really explain it, but I think it is your humour.
Even though you have had your diary for ages, in terms of writing style you still have a long way to go.

Layout [5/30]- The only thing I like is the simplicity about it, in the way that it uses images of drawings. The Harry Potter theme, however, I do not like. You also need to minimise the amount of links you have.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - About the only good thing.

Contact [3/5] - Put them under their own heading or link.

Extra Things [3/5] - Ditto to above.

Your Song - Obviously something Harry potter-like.


Three Words - Comical, illustrated, detailed.


I think your diary title should be - In a much better resolution. it puts me off a lot.

Your lyrical word of advice - I know that you used this in your diary, but I liked it.



Centre of her own attention.
Mother reads aloud,
Child tries to understand it.
Daughter - Pearl Jam

Extra comments: 5 points from request section.

Total Score -[38/100]

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