We give them away.

2004-06-07 4:50 p.m.
angel-pink

Username/Diary Title [2/5] - I really dislike usernames with words like angel, pretty, pink, and all that girly stuff in it. Not that big a fan. Sorry.

First Impression [8/10] - I like the whole maroon feel of the diary. It's looks very poetic. I'm not sure if that's what you wanted it to feel like. But that's how I feel about it.

Content [34/40] - From the entries I've read, you sound like a normal teen going though stages. It seems like you have a lot of problems with grades, school, relationships, freinds, etc. I think you give really good descriptive information to help the readers visulaize what you're trying to explain to them. That's diffinitely a plus. This was one of my favorite part of your entry, "Exactly what is it that’s keeping me here? Am I so sad that I cling to this pathetic thing I like to call writing in a desperate attempt to save a tiny shred of hope. Is it to try and stop myself from falling into a deep sea of self-pity and sadness, because from where I’m standing I’m still drowning. I was drowning when I started this thing and I’m drowning now, sure I came up for air once or twice but it never lasts does it. I’m tired of this and I think the end is nearing. I’m not able to express myself freely in this thing and I don’t want to have to hold myself back, but I’m always so conscious of what people will think when they read this. I know I shouldn’t be but it’s who I am. I know I’ve probably discussed this before but I’m still thinking over things, respect that." It seems like you're a dreamer, that needs to think twice about things before you actually attempt to do it. I like writers who expresses their feelings this way.

Layout [23/30]- I really love the colors of the layout. The picture is pretty small; and if it was bigger, it will bring out the confused look you're trying to pull. The whole navigation and contact part is really organized. But it seems like there something missing in the middle of the whole page.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] - As I said before, I like the way you write. It's very modern yet not slangish (if that's a word) like most people use. Your grammer and spelling is fine. Your vocabulary is seem to be advanced enough for me.

Contact [5/5] - I guess I can find you everywhere. Nothing more to say, e-mail, notes, guestbook, and guestmap seems to be enough.

Extra Things [5/5] - You have a lot of fun extras. I actually did that slam book thing, really good to help your visitors stay entertained.

Level of:
Angst: You seemed very stressed about the whole relationship problem, and the problems you have at school. [7]
Depression: You didn't seem like you were stressing that much over it. Although, you did admit that you were disappointed at some point. [5]
Happiness: From your latest entries, you don't seem that happy. [3]
Sociability: Although you have relationship problems, you seem to have a couple of friends that you've mentioned. [5]
Boredom: It didn't bore me to the point that it's boring. But try to add more things that are HAPPY. Sometimes reading about someone's horrible days aren't that fun. [6]
Selfishness: You don't sound selfish or at least you didn't admit that you are. [2]
Coolness: After going through your slam book, you are officially cool. [8]
Musicality: I didn't see that much about music, but I did like some of the poems you write/collected. Very unique. [7]

Three Words - Confused.Mixed.Drama.

Your Song- The Scientist by Coldplay.

Total Score -[82/100]

Reviewed by Kelly

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