2004-02-16 8:17 p.m.
abbeyangell Content (20/40)- From what I read, which wasn't much, because I got tired of highlighting the entries, you write fairly well. You write about yourself adn what's going on with you. Your writing is somewhat different than other people's. I kind of felt lonely reading your diary, because even though you mention people, you seem kind of alone. I don't like when every entry a person writes is about someone else, but I do like a little drama between people and you just wrote about yourself. I know a diary is for writing about yourself, but it's also to write about events and inner thoughts. You wrote a few personal things, but nothing that really defines you as a person. I was interested, but bored. Plus the color issue didn't help any. Layout (1/10)- This has to be self-designed. It's solid black with purple writing and a little cartoon doll sitting at the top. I absolutely loathe those cartoon dolls and on a respectable diary layout, it's wretched. Get something at least partially acceptable and presentable to the human eye. The links are annoying and take up too much room at the bottom. I don't like anything about this layout at all. It doesn't even seem to go along with the type of person you are. The dark purple writing is really hard to read against the black background. God, just go to beautify and find a new one or something. You get one point for at least trying to make it yourself. Grammar and Spelling (13/15)- I'm not complaining. Updating (5/5)- Refuse to grade this area, so you get free points. Contacts (10/10)- Guestbook. Tagboard. Email [2]. AIM. MSN. Yahoo. Getting Around (7/10)- Simple, but annoying. Extra Things (5/5)- Just me. Cast. Extras [too many to list]. Fun Factor (0/5)- I was kind of bored, to be honest. Extra Credit (2/5)- For the thousands of extras you had. Total (63/100)- Comments- You really need to chage the layout. Find something a little more grown up for you and write moe about what you think and not so much what you feel. I don't know if that maks sense to you, but I don't know how else to explain it. Reviewed by- Mandy |
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