2005-03-08 7:46 p.m.
Sourballs123

Username/Diary Title [2/5] - Sourballs123 - Well I would not click this from a list, and the 123 is just pointless. Some classic pin up hottie- Well, I can’t work out the relevance.

First Impression [0/10] - I HATE music on diaries. It conflicts with my own music and puts me off a lot.


Content [5/40] - It mostly consists of a load of ranting and cursing. Not natural cursing, but stupid words that just annoy me. You focus no a lot of different topics and basically just tear them apart. Fortunately, you were saved because 2 or 3 of these topics I actually agreed with what you were saying. However the juvenile tone that I can make out just turns me off your writing completely, and writing about it just annoys me even more and shows me more holes to pick at.

Layout [10/30]- You ruin a perfectly good layout by adding loads of stuff at the bottom, like this music. It takes ages to load, stops when I change the page, and takes up too much room! All random links should be on their own page. Apart from the bottom, the rest of the template is fine. I especially like the way the links stand out.
What the hell is up with your archive page?

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [2/5] - Just the odd typo and the babble of swear words.

Contact [5/5] - Look good, and I like that they are under their own heading.

Extra Things [3/5] - Mostly I have seen them before, but I was entertained. You have broken image links.

Your song - Obviously the one playing.

Three Words - Annoying, juvenile, musical.
I think your diary title should be - Silent.

Your lyrical word of advice


She was always such a pretty girl
Nobody like her in the world
A little piece of heavenly
That no one else could stand
I see her in my dreams at night
I see you when I close my eyes
I just can't seem to shake you, Emily

Bowling For Soup- Emily.

Extra comments: You are owed 5 points extra. None.

Total Score -[32/100]

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