2004-05-19 11:19 p.m.
lastflightin

[Hello, I've waited here for you, everlong.]


Username/Diary Title [4/5] – Well, I like the username, it seems to fit well with your layout, but I don't really like the title. It just doesn't make much sense to me, it doesn't seem to relate to your diary.

First Impression [10/10] – I like the colors, and the scroll bar is nifty..

Content [37/40] – Well, I do like the way that you write, it's more of a poetry type diary, but it seems like your words are almost too.. forced. It just seems like you try too hard instead of letting it flow. But only sometimes. Other times you have these awesome entries. I didn't read them all though. Your most recent entry, "Abandoned Buildings, Hibiscus, and Cement", I really liked that one..

Layout [26/30]- I like everything but the image, I don't know why it just doesn't seem to fit. It's a pair of birds.. I'm not big on birds sorry. But I liked the colors and everything, and i'm a big fan of text boxes. Hooray!.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [5/5] – Just once or twice, nothing to penalize you for..

Contact [2/5] – All I see is e-mail and notes, are there more somewhere? You might want to invest in a guestbook, it's an easy way to comment on your diary, if somebody stops by.

Extra Things [5/5] – Yup, you've got plenty. Reviews, bio, reads, etc. Hooray!

Level of: This is where we determine the levels of certain things in your diary. [on a scale of 1-10]

Angst: Your life doesn't seem too bad. Except for the home schooling thing, I don't think i'd be able to stand it. A 1..

Depression: A 1. You don't seem depressed at all, maybe just a little sad at times?

Happiness: A 9. You seem pretty happy, from what I read anyway. I didn't really pull much emotion out of your writing, i'm kind of assuming here.

Sociability: I read your bio, and you have your three best friend and your boyfriend, what more could a girl ask for? A 10.

Boredom: I'll have to go with a 4. I was a little bored at times, but maybe it's just this annoying short attention span of mine.

Selfishness: A 0 here also. You don't seem selfish at all.

Coolness: An 8. You're pretty cool, if you ask me. And look, you did!

Musicality: I didn't pick up on much music.. but you did mention Willy Wonka, and that has music in it! So i'll give you a 6.



Three Words – Lucky, Optimistic, Intelligent.

Your song – Thinking.. thinking.. "Hands Down" by Dashboard Confessional? Sounds good.

Total Score -[89/100]

Reviewed by-Angel

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