2004-05-09 9:27 p.m.
snowdrop114

[Hold a butterfly too tight, and you'll crush it]


Username/Diary Title [5/5] – Snowdrop is cute, and 114 is similar to 141, which is my number! Rock on! And I like the title, it's cute.

First Impression [7/10] – Your image isn't working... ? But I like the color, easy on the eyes.

Content [37/40] – You're a very good writer. You do have the occasional daylog, but then you also have this amazing one-liners that I really enjoyed. Kind of like a diary with a little poetry here and there. You did write an awful lot about wanting a boyfriend, but you're a (now 18) teenager and what teenager doesn't want a relationship? I liked your diary, it's something that I could relate to and I got into it well. I actually read the whole thing.

Layout [27/30]- I do like the way it's all set up, with the green and the black, but I can't be 100% sure because I don't see an image! It's easy on the eyes though, that's always a plus.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [4/5] –Oh dear. You did spell things incorrectly quite a bit, and that got annoying after a while. But you aren't from the USA, so your primary language may not be English and it may not be your fault.

Contact [5/5] – Guestbook, Guestmap, e-mail, and notes. Everything a diary needs. Good job!.

Extra Things [4/5] – Hm. You've got designs, which I didn't check out (yet!), reviews, and things about you. Sounds good to me. Maybe you could add a 101 things? Just a random list of things about you. I love reading those!

Level of: This is where we determine the levels of certain things in your diary. [on a scale of 1-10]

Angst: Hm. You get a 2. Your life seems pretty great, aside from the lack of a boyfriend stuff.

Depression: Well, in the more recent entries you seem to be a bit depressed, but overall you seem pretty content, so i'll give you a 2 on this one too.

Happiness: You seem pretty happy. Not necessarily happy, but you seem ... okay, or content, though i've already used that! I'll give you a 7.

Sociability: A 10. You only mention a few friends, but they are your close friends and sometimes that's better than having 37 not so close friends.

Boredom: With you, I wasn't bored at all. It was a very good read. 10.

Selfishness: You didn't seem too selfish. You wrote about things that happened to you, or about being angry with your mom, but you seemed like a very nice person. 9.

Coolness: 8. You rock!

Musicality: I think you're more into drama than music, I don't remember if I read anything about music or not. So i'll have to go with a 3..



Three Words – Unique, Actress, Lonely.

Your song – I'll dedicate the Happy Birthday song to you, since your birthday was recently. Happy Birthday!.

Total Score -[89/100]

Reviewed by-Angel

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