2004-05-02 10:22 p.m.
dombilly

[_____i found a way to show a side of me // you didnt know]


Username/Diary Title [3/5] – Okay, maybe i'm just dumb but I don't understand the "dombilly" at all. I even tried to pull something out of my mind, but it just doesn't make sense to me. Sorry. I do like your title though. _____i found a way to show a side of me // you didn't know... it's really good and meaningful.

First Impression [6/10] – Is there supposed to be no image? I don't get it. At first I thought it was a guy's diary...

Content [29/40] – Well, you daylog quite a bit. I read about 60 entries, and I really just couldn't get into your diary. I did read the entry where you said that you don't write about what you're feeling, but that's what you need to do. That's what your readers want, and that's what will attract more. You do have the occasional really good entry, but then it's followed up by a conversation you had in science class or something. Just didn't appeal to me. You also wrote a lot about your different layouts, though I never saw but the one (which is good), but those entries were kind of pointless and annoying.

Layout [25/30]- There's no image. I don't usually like layouts without an image, they are just so boring.. This one is plain and boring but if it works for you then I can't complain.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [3/5] – In your most recent entry you used "yr" for your, which really annoyed me. You constantly used "me" insead of "my", which absolutely drove me nuts. I did read in your disclaimer about how it's your diary and you type how you say things, but you're just going to have to accept a low score when you don't type or spell the way it should be typed/spelled.

Contact [5/5] – Guestbook, notes, e-mail, AIM..and it's all own it's own pretty little page. Good job.

Extra Things [5/5] – You've got tons, which is awesome. However, I did notice a "cutters club", which seemed kind of odd to me. Of course I clicked on it. It's just a place for "cutters" to talk to one another. Not that it's something to be proud of, but hey, atleast you are all coming together. That way when you guys finally realize how much you shouldn't cut, you'll have others to contact and preach to about it. Good luck with that!.

Level of: This is where we determine the levels of certain things in your diary. [on a scale of 1-10]

Angst: Well, you don't seem to have a sucky life so i'll give you a 3. Of course, you also don't seem to put much emotion into your writing, atleast not the previous stuff, and I always start from the beginning..

Depression: In one entry (and only one, that I read anyway) you wrote about how you were depressed, and it seemed pretty bad. So i'll give you a 7 for that. .

Happiness: Well, you didn't seem sad, but you didn't necessarily seem happy all the time either. I hate having to read between the lines. 6.

Sociability: 8. You mention lots of friends, a lot of the time. Okay, most of the time.

Boredom: I just couldn't get into the daylogging, I was pretty bored. Sorry... 8..

Selfishness: You seemed pretty proud of the fact that you had money. But that was really the only piece of selfishness I got from you. 6.

Coolness: A 4. You didn't seem too cool to me, you just don't have my style of writing.

Musicality: Well, I think you mentioned matchbox 20 (maybe? I can't remember) so i'll give you a 7.



Three Words – Vacations, Young, Private

Your song – Your song is "My Immortal" by Evanescence.

Total Score -[76/100]

Reviewed by-Angel

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