2004-05-01 11:03 p.m.
fake-angelic

[//won't you catch me (before i hit the ground?)//]


Username/Diary Title [4/5] – fake-angelic. Hm. That's interesting. I don't really understand it, or why it's "angelic" instead of just "fake-angel" or something of the sort. But hey, it seems to fit you. //won't you catch me (before i hit the ground?)// Now that's something that I like. Depressing, but good..

First Impression [8/10] – The first thing I noticed was the image, and at first it was kind of odd looking. But then I read the words above and below the text box and I started to like it more.

Content [32/40] – Okay, at first I was surprised at your age. I thought you were just another kid. I read 20-ish entries. Most of them were really short, which annoyed me. You wrote about your broken heart constantly. I can relate, to an extent. But writing about it so much gets old. I just couldn't really get into your diary. You have so much potential, and those little short entries could be amazing if you expanded them a bit. However, you did include Dashboard Confessional lyrics, which I absolutely adore. I'm in love with them! So you do get some extra points for that. Yay!.

Layout [27/30]- Well, it's got a lot of white space, which I do like a lot. Text box, simple image of a girl, and some writing. All the navigation is at the left, easy access. I like the colors, and I really like the scroll bars. I hate the boring grey ones, though they do work well for some diaries. Overall I liked your layout. It was simple but it got the point across..

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary [2/5] – You don't capitalize your sentences, which annoyed me. What's with the "yr" stuff? That makes me think of "year", not "your". You used the wrong word sometimes, and you had the average amount of spelling mistakes. But really, if you just capitalized the first letter of your sentences it would be a lot better..

Contact [0/5] – Okay maybe i'm blind.. but I don't see any form of contact. Not even an e-mail. You might want to work on that..

Extra Things [2/5] – You've got lyrics, rings, photos, poetry, and reviews. There's no cast or 101 things or anything like most diaries have, but that's okay. I went to your pictures and I was disgusted with you. It's one thing to cut, but it's another entirely to flaunt it on the internet in a photo album. Yes, I did see the entry where you warned "us", but that's not something that you should even put up. It's almost like your proud of what you do, either that or you're desperately seeking attention. Either way it just made me mad.

Level of: This is where we determine the levels of certain things in your diary. [on a scale of 1-10]

Angst: Yeah, let's go with a 9.5. Your life seems pretty sucky, but of course, all you show is the bad parts of it.

Depression: Yup, that would be a big ol' 10. You're worse than me!.

Happiness: Hm...there was no happiness. Ahh! 1.5, just because..

Sociability: You've mentioned very few people, so i'll give you a pretty little 3.

Boredom: I was pretty bored hearing about the same thing over and over. You get an 8.

Selfishness: Hm. Maybe a little? 4.

Coolness: Um, not too high. A 3, but really only because I like your layout. And you like Dashboard Confessionals. Take those pictures off, they are just wrong.

Musicality: Oh yay! You get a.. 9! Because I like your choice of music.



Three Words – Hm. Depressed, Lonely, Broken..

Your song – Your song is "Life" by Our Lady Peace, because I said so. Yay!

Total Score -[75/100]

Reviewed by-Angel

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