2004-01-28 4:25 p.m.
sorry-excuse Content (39/40)- The first thing i read on your diary was your bio page. It contains the usual stuff but I stopped short when I saw this, "and sometimes my alters write here." I felt intrigued so I went to your cast page to find out. Pretty interesting. Anyway, when I found out that you're a cutter, I thought, "O'oh. Another depressing diary. Just great." And I was right. When I first started reading your entries, I felt bored. I dunno. But as I go on, the beauty of your words, your phrases, your sentences somehow sprang to life and I was deeply amazed and in awe. No one had ever written such beautiful posts before with deep, heartfelt emotions. I'm so very sad to read about your life and the pains of living through it... and I feel you. Everytime you hurt yourself, I felt worried about your well-being even though I don't really know you. Layout (9/10)- Design credits goes to divadesigns. I've seen this layout many times and was about to deduct marks when I saw how much it suits you. The pale colours, the bleakness of it all. Grammar and Spelling (12/15)- Not too bad. Spotted some mistakes here and there. And you capitalize! Updating (2.5/5)- A lot of breaks but with multiple. I can't really blame you but it's been a long time since you've updated. Since 20th December? Are you alright? Contacts (4/10)- Notes and email. Getting Around (8/10)- Very easy. All the links work but I realise that there's no link back to Truth-Review. Minus points. Extra Things (3/5)- Quizzes, rings, lot's of poems and quotes. Fun Factor (0/5)- A depressing diary can never be fun. Extra Credit (0/5)- Ho-hum Total (77.5/100)- Bronze award. Comments- Really beautiful entries. Anyway, are you alright now? You haven't been updating lately and I know that most of your readers are worried. Reviewed by- Noraini previous | next |
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